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Dear Rachel:

These days have been hard
These nights have been restless
I've lost both physically and mentally
Worried.
Troubled.
Wishing you'd be mine
But here we are tonight.
This love I have for you
Is an endless sea of hope
For all of my days
I see the luster and glow in your eyes
I feel redemption
A sense of joy
Even in the darkest of hours
A pain in my side
Telling me I'm alive,
and that you're real
I've gotten the most joy anyone could ask for
You've given me the vision and choice to be on the right side
I love you for that
I love you for everything you are
and everything you aren't
The person you are
the person you will forever be
Is the person I will always love
Until the end of time itself.

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  • Erotik Rose silver member
    November 8, 2008

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    Awwwww... this is really good I like it, thank you for entering the contest and good luck.


  • Kiwi Grimm
    November 5, 2008

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    ^_^

    awwwwwww
    i sound like a broken record...but i like records so it's cool. uhmmmmm I LOVE YOU! lmao