I want to cry
But the tears just won’t come
I wish I could feel something
But instead I just feel numb
Everywhere I look
Something reminds me of you
Our first kiss in the rite aid parking lot
When I admitted I love you to
But most of the memories
Aren’t charming and cheerful
The day you said it was over
The wreck you made me was pitiful
When ever I see a razor blade
It reminds me of you
Not ‘cause you used it
But because you caused me to
So as these tears sit frozen
Stuck in my head, behind my eyes
I hope you know that you
Captured my heart with your merciless lies
But no more tears will fall
As a result of your petty fears
Every memory is shoved in a vault
Behind my frozen tears
Each memory carefully locked away
With a tear locked up to
A tear that will never be born
And this is all thanks to you
Author notes
~Memories floating on frozen tears
not sure if it will blow you away but usally the options contest do inspire me but this one did.
A contest entry
- Phrases :) by Beauty Of Silence.
800 points, ended November 13, 2008, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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aww
this sucks. not the poem. this feeling just sucks. and you've expressed it very well here. though your words were simple, and though this was a little lengty, it was real good, coz the emotions here was just so raw. your flow was great, and there were some points that almost made me cry, and some when the imagery was so powerful it painted such strong pictures in mind. great write. keep penning, and thank you so much for this entry
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