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The Power in a Relationship

Hell on earth comes in many forms,
such as bad marriages and relationships.
This dark bond is hard to break and
there is no connection to another soul. 

This association be it a marriage or
partnership has a sick overtone.
One that cannot be broken easily.

Why does the one who is doing
the cheating, whether physical
or otherwise always have the
power. Maybe it is the power
and sensation this person seeks.

Could this sick sensation be
akin to one of sadism and
masochism.  It is sometimes
hard to tell where one begins
and one ends.

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  • Walking Oxymoron gold member
    November 21, 2008

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    Sometimes that's true, there is avery fine line between real and fantasy, between acceptable and over the line,

    Great write


  • dustytiger
    November 11, 2008

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    wow this is a huge emotion, i never would have thought to do something like that with the prompt, but you came out with something fantastic, best of luck