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F.a.T

I have a secret
not so dirty
like many
not so...
shameful

just there

outside,
you think you know my shape
but I'm really 200 pounds

inching my ways
closer and closer
each day
week
year
at this rate
I'll be as big as the world

I know there's no need to fill what's been filled
but my tongue and mind lead the way
chocolate
candy
junk
extra servings
and for what?
for my mind
that means nothing when it comes down to it


I see you
maybe you're fat too
that I could care less about
you're the person I love
or the person who's done me no wrong
but I can't seem to turn that acceptance inside

out
  then in

up
  and down

I can't even make any sense of it anymore


and the saddest part is
I can't stop

[nor do I want to]

Anything that can help me make it better..

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  • Ali - Pie
    November 6, 2008

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    Beautiful

    I feel your poem u wrote here! everyones beautiful regardless of weight!

    great job with this poem