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White Angels

Beautiful Angels clad in white
silently watching over me
Together they protect my soul

the first controls my destiny
the second dictates how long I will keep my soul
the third decides when to take it away from me

My mortal life will never know
their presence within me
But they watch each step I make

and whom I take the journey with

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Moonlight Fairies by manips-of-artist2

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  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    November 9, 2008

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    Ahh the three angels of fate who guide our destiny! A very nice take!


    • buffsab99
      November 10, 2008
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      Thank you

      Hopefully they guide us well through our journey


  • LadyDementia gold member
    November 9, 2008

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    An intersting idea, very well penned. I like the idea they all control a part of us, creative take. Thanks for entering and good luck

    • buffsab99
      November 9, 2008
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      Thank you

      Thank you, in ancient times it was beleived everyone had 3 angels watching over them and they controled the fate of their lives