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Short but True

Love is as much of an object as obsession.
Everybody wants it.
Everybody seeks it.
But Few ever achieve it.
Those who do, cherish it.
They're lost in it.
And among all,
They never forget it.

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  • hks
    November 6, 2008
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    impossible to disagree