Laughter rings in my ears,
a smile forms on my lips,
gentle hands take mine,
and whispers dance along my skin,
even though my eyes are closed,
even though i cannot see,
your beauty astounds my senses,
your love brings me peace,
though i may fade into nothing,
though words become empty over time,
i say now with absolute reality,
I love you,
until the end, of time...
Comments
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beautiful poem, i can definitely relate. only suggestion is to get rid of the comma in the final line and maybe revise it to get it to fit into the rhythm pattern. otherwise i think it's perfect
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i love it i cant get enough of it keep it up keep on going great job and great write i love the whole thing nothing to complain about its great stay true stay sic and peace out
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