Dear,
Have i told you?
Your eyes are three shades of green.
Green like life
and all i could ever mean
three shades of deep, lush green.
And your words
are like the sweetest perfume
taste like the
sky and the moon
entrancing, so hard to believe
but can only be percieved
as the utmost, beautiful truth.
Your dry hands are never cold
and eye contact is like lighting bolts
like liquified gold
smooth and distilled, unperturbed
undisturbed.
So many people
see all that is true
but they see only that
i see you.
A contest entry
- A Letter To My Love by Erotik Rose.
750 points, ended November 23, 2008, 31 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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*GASP* Beautiful! D=
It rolled off my eyes when I was reading it (rolled off my mind? Inner tongue..? >> Hmm. Gonna have to think about this.) and the end concludes the piece fantastically.
Soooo, I'm going to have to throw praise at you and commence a wander through your poetry XD
(see praise below)
(...)
(it's the applause, guys...)
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very beautiful...an alchemy so to speak in emotions per se
I love every line and the way you connect them with each other but mostly I love this part...
So many people
see all that is true
but they see only that
i see you.
it's poetry in itself...
Anna Lee
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Very nice, I thank you for entering the contest and good luck.
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