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My Happy Ending

Snow White,
Sleeping Beauty,
Cinderella.
They all have one thing in common.
A happy ending.

Not just any happy ending, mind you.
But one with a prince charming,
And a true love's kiss.

Where's my prince charming?
Sure, my story's not done,
But still.
What if I was the damsel in distress?
Who would care enough to save me,
Let alone with a kiss.

Moral of the story is,
In reality, there is no happy ending
Or prince charming to save you.
You've got to save yourself
Or nobody will.

A contest entry

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  • wakawaka05
    December 1, 2008

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    What a great write. It is a beautiful piece with a great flow. I have to agree with you that fairy tale endings arent real. Thank you for entering. Best of luck in the contest and future writing.
    Caity
    >Wakawaka<


  • Sandygram
    November 19, 2008

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    You words are so true. Happy endings are hard to find anymore. I guess thats why I dream so much. Wonderful poem!!!!! Thank you for entering my contest.This was a pleasure to read. It is most appreciated. You take care. Sandy

  • SilentMoonlight
    November 5, 2008

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    This was a cute poem with a good idea and a good moral behind it though I couldn't see a firm structure in this. I love the last two lines simple yet direct.

    Good job!


  • Midgetbridgey
    November 5, 2008
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    haha i like =)


  • greatperhaps
    November 5, 2008

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    OHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH DON'T MAKE ME GET ALL PISSY AT YOU!!!!! Good job! you communicated an aditude and a point in a very sharp poem! way to rant against Disney and the impossible standards they set!!!!! you go girl!!!!!!

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