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The Clock-limerick for class


There once was a boy named Small Ben.
He drummed on a toy not a pen.
So loud and so strong,
The sound was a dong.
He's now a Big Ben among men!





this is my first ever limerick which looks harder to do than it sounds! Any comments, suggestions are welcome.

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  • Ellis gold member
    January 12
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    Good Job

    Very clever. Good limerick.