Distance
Distance means nothing to me,
Me, I can take it, and let it be
Let it be and love you always
Love you always, all my days
All my days, I devote to you
You and I will make it through
-Kristine86
Author notes
This is a contest entry. I used the following quote as my prompt:
"Even though we're far apart I love you dearly with all my heart."
~ Unknown
I entered this contest late, and probably would have tried to make this longer if I had time. I still thought it was cute being short, so I submitted it!
A contest entry
- My First Contest... Options.. by Leonura.
1800 points, ended November 6, 2008, 20 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think?
Comments
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this was a very simple and emotional poem, i think the length and simplicity made this very effective
well done
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Few rods with heartfelt meaning. beautiful. thank you very much fer your entry.
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Very good,says a lot in a few words.
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its a really cute poem for the contest its for, i usually dont like using the form that its in, but for a short poem like this, it works.... good job
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