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Blue Eyed Love

What is my belief in love?
It's hard to put to word's.
It doesn't come from my soft heart
It's how he feels for her.

When i look into his eyes
I see a loving blue.
The way she brings him happiness
I know this love is true.

Now please god I need your help
Let them be together.
Because no matter what I say
He shall love her forever.

Author notes

My friend really likes this girl named sarah and this is a poem about how much i want them to get together. Easy as that, hope you liked it

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  • oOJohnOo
    November 5, 2008

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    you seem like a true friend to be able to see those feelings so clearly. have you not personally felt this love though?