I saw him again
Like the reflection of a ghost I won't forget
I touched him again
And as hard as I try it's something I can't regret
We whispered again
Sharing secrets of lovers reborn
We kissed again
Tasting sin on lips refusing to be torn
I'm whole again
He makes my twisted puzzle complete
I'm addicted again
Because his love to me is so sweet
I'm his again
I don't want to hold back any more
Together again
And slowly we can begin to restore
A contest entry
- "Speaking of......." (CONTEST) by Paloszoo.
700 points, ended November 13, 2008, 16 entries
Gold trophy winner
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Nicely done. You give it a haunting feeling at the start and delve into sensual romance from there. The repetition of "again" gave it a beat rather than be a mundane distraction. Sometimes repeating a word like that can get mundane to the reader and take away from the piece.
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Thanks! I appreciate the feedback
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Wonderful! Well written and oozes with honest emotion! Thanks for entering my contest. I'm honored to have you share your work here. Good luck!
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Thank you!!
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Amazing how something can both hold together and pull apart, create and destroy, feel great and feel horrible.
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oh love...
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wonderful
I love this, well written and I can feel the conection between these two people.
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