no one talks to me
i feel so alone
there is no place for me to call home
all my frightness and flight
regards to a knife
i write on my arm
this pain feels so right
everyone thinks im crazy
everyone thinks im grim
but no one can see all this pain thats within
i wish i could think once or just twice
instead i have to sit here and fight for my life
the pills in the cupboard...
the knife by my side..
the rope in my closet...
the gun in my hand...
im sorry but i have to say this is the end
i have no family
i have no more friends
now everyone must suffer
like i had once did
but noone loves me so i guess its alright
A contest entry
- the emotional rounds - 1 by Ryno.
400 points, ended December 26, 2008, 23 entries
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aww... so sad... but good writing
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aw hon. is this true? i hope not! that's terrible...but i loved it anyway, the poem itself was gripping and it catches your eye. but yeah
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I'm sorry that you feel like this. It is truly depressing but on AP you can always talk to me too and others I'm sure as well.
I look forward to reading something from you soon that full of hope and compassion. Don't let life get you so down and out. I can tell you are struggling and feel like "they" are winning, but don't give up the fight...I believe that everything that happens in a person's life will make them a stronger person in the future and there is always a lesson to be learned every day. Just don't give up the fight and don't end your life that truly isn't the road to take. I've had a friend who done that and it nearly destroyed me and so though I may not know your story or how things are with you. I will say that you have friends here including me. If you ever want to talk we can. God bless you always in everything you do and write.
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Wow.
Very haunting. I definitely don't think you're crazy, let's put it that way. Always remember that your fellow poets are here for you if you need someone to talk to.
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very emotional i love it
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wow.
thats kinda depressing.
you can always talk to me on here if you need someone to talk to =]
but very good =D
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i kow what u mean cos i feel like that most of the time as well
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:)
i love it i rock -
Deep
Deep emotions expressed here, i feel what your saying, i've been there, its a good write, i look forward to any more poems you may write.
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I understand how you feel. Been fighting for mine 3 years now. It is hard as hell
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