Roof rises to nudge the golden sun;
cat scratches his neck with one paw
in accordance with natural law
Kaleidoscope of glowing green tints;
roses withstand cool wind
as winter weaves hints
Misty moon begins to compete
with dwindling half light;
subtleties and silhouettes delight
Prelude to the onset
of November night.
Author notes
Olivia33
Upon The Wings Of Your Design
A contest entry
- Titles and Options OH MY! by badnovocaine.
900 points, ended November 18, 2008, 10 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Your words compete with each other,
one page after another, just as
"...Misty moon begins to compete
with dwindling half light;"----
another gem.
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imaginary powerfully deep and this has great flow and is a powerful write well done!!
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Thank you!
How're you doing?
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Kaleidoscope of glowing green tints;
roses withstand cool wind
as winter weaves hints
Oh my I loved how this flowed.
You put it together nicely and I would have never thought of this title in that way, you took a beautiful title and made something unique out of it. This was a great read, much appreciated.
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I wrote this poem while sitting in my front yard in the late afternoon
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