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Speaking of Black....

Okay, about the color black.

I like black.

That does not make me a bad person.

I don't kill babies,

Or sacrifice cute little puppies

To the devil

In a ritual by the light of the full moon.

I don't commit serial murder

Or randomly go out to kill people in their sleep.

I've never vandalized

Or stolen

Or done drugs.

So why do you all stare at me

Like I have some sort of disease?

Why do you lump me, judge me,

Box me into a neat little stereotype?

Please, stop glaring at me

As if I'm smallpox reincarnated.

I just want to wear

What I feel like wearing.

Is that so much to ask?

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  • Paloszoo gold member
    November 12, 2008

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    I can relate to this. Black happens to make me look thinner Thanks for entering my contest. I'm honored to have you share your work here. Good luck!


    • silvermisery
      November 12, 2008
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      oh geez...I know exactly what you mean....haha that's one of the reasons why I wear black all the time...


  • BreakTheBroken
    November 5, 2008

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    Black is possibly the best color out there.
    about your poem tho...

    It is well written and to the point. Its also very well phrased. Congrats, good luck


  • phynix
    November 5, 2008

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    there's nothing wrong with liking black. its a nice color. ppl just dont kno how to deal with ppl that they dont understand.


  • lovexinxcoldxblood
    November 5, 2008
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    yes! I love black and i am not wierder than normal!

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