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The Trees Are Skeletons Beyond The Gate.(Triolet)

The trees are skeletons beyond the gate
Bare limbs begging for an early spring
Anxiously awaiting winters abate
The trees are skeletons beyond the gate
Ready to bud, leaf and celebrate
Once again the earth's awakening
The trees are skeletons beyond the gate
Bare limbs begging for an early spring

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  • JinSays gold member
    November 7, 2008

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    for a 94 year old, you danced around my head pretty well.
    Absolutely fabulous use of my prompt, thank you.
    jin