Your face, sun to the leaf
Your smile, rain to the root
Your hand in mind, photosynthesis
Blooming
Author notes
Love is growth
A contest entry
- History Books Forgot about Us (And the Bible Didn't Mention Us.) by They Say Shannon.
600 points, ended November 27, 2008, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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This is very cute, very fresh and very imaginative. Well done matie.
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Thanks very much!
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Oh, wow, this was really short but really sweet too.
It had so much beauty and truth to it.
It's just nice, the images of freshness and purity. Like after a rain in the summer or spring or something.
It gave me just a light, nice, innocent feel and I like that.
It just makes me want to smile.
Fantastic job.
Sorry it's taken so long to get around to commenting it. >.>
Haha. I've just been so busy lately.
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Busy is always better than bored!
Glad you enjoyed the read, thanks for the comments!
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