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Untruthful Reflections

Missing image

Convoluted Images
Disarray of the mind

Different ideals
Identities
Reflections

Not the true me

A maze of confusion

No end in sight


Clouded by false truths
Mist settling on all
Suppressing the true me

Sheltering my innocence
Yet trapping it inside

Author notes

Slightly random...this seems to be the best my dead muse can do right now

Picture credit: Moonlight Fairies by manips-of-artist2

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  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    November 9, 2008

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    I like the darker take on the picture... and how you saw the three as different parts of inner turmoil! Nicely done!


  • LadyDementia gold member
    November 9, 2008

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    I think your muse is playing tricks, this is a wonderful read. A superb take on the picture, thanks for entering and good luck


  • checkmate-
    November 6, 2008

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    Good job

    <= love those! YAY!

    My muse is currently MIA as well.

    ~Athena


  • my02U
    November 6, 2008
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    heres your clappies - from my 1st comment, lol

    luv,
    lovey

  • Black-Fang
    November 6, 2008
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    i really like this poem, especially the last part
    "sheltering my innocence
    yet trapping it inside"

    keep up the good writes and good luck in the contest

  • Black-Fang
    November 6, 2008

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    i really like this poem especially the last part
    "sheltering my innocence
    yet trapping it inside"
    keep up the good writes

  • Judith Chandler
    November 6, 2008

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    An interesting take, sounds like your think of these figures in the prompt as confused aspect of yourself. I like that idea, it's quite original.

    I don't think your muse has expired just yet. Keep trying to revive it.

    • my02U
      November 6, 2008
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      i agree, this is extremely quite amazingly *insert flowery adjective*-ly interesting idea. Keep going, Sis.

      luv,
      lovey

      hang on let me find you some clappies... where are them handsome clappies? wherefore art thou my clappies? Claaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaapiesssssssssssssssssssss!!!
      Where aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaare youuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu? aha. found em! oh. i can't put them on a reply box. i knew that.

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