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He'll send her to her grave

She locks herself inside
Her pain replaced with pride
For she can't let him see
Her anguished misery

 

She covers up and lies

For she cannot abide

Thier questions and their stares

There is too much to fear

 

Must have done something wrong

Because he is so strong

He says that she was bad

It's her fault that she's sad

 

But still she loves him so

He knows she will not go

She is his little slave

He'll send her to her grave

 

Her friends all ask her 'why?'

Tell her to say 'goodbye'

But they don't understand

He hits her cause she's bad

 

She swears he loves her so

So she cannot just go

She is his little slave

He'll send her to her grave

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  • xxRainbowDawnxx
    December 17, 2008

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    I know how you feel here, I hide behind myself and others to show what really is hurting me. I just can't let it out.


  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    November 22, 2008

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    I can relate to this one on a personal level since my ex used to say it was my fault he beat me ... very powerfully penned.

    Excellent write

    Thank You & Best of Luck
    Stay safe
    ~Manda