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Little Bird Abused

Little bird,

I failed,to shelter you,
from the beast within our nest.
And, so my heart grows weary,
as your wings you've spread to
test.You did not waver
all the while, your destiny
uncertain.You brushed your
beak, across my cheek
and flew away.

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