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I wore it last at supper


I lost the crucifix
that hung around my neck
Undid the clasp
Removed it
in my weak attempt
to make it clean
Left lying
on the bathroom counter
next to my hope, faith, and peace.
Gone now,
Probably fallen among the unclean
clothes strewn about
Maybe it will reappear
when this house is clean. 

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