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Memorial

Beyond the harbour wall there stands an edifice,

Featureless, erect and grey as the skies that glower down.

The wind pelts it's face with salt spray but it cannot turn away.

Stalwart waypoint on the voyage home,

It guides my way to safety,

A friend at a distance.

 

I walk there sometimes and read the names

Now blurred with time and weather,

Boys lost to the deep.

Some still await their return,

Lives in limbo as the tides ebb and flow.

 

At the eleventh hour of the eleventh day

All but the gulls and the waves fall silent here.

Weak sunshine silvers the glint of medals and of tears.

Amongst the polished boots and shoes

Scarlet petals flutter,

And They live again.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author notes

The war memorial on Portsmouth Harbour can be clearly seen from the sea and is a real facal point for local people, old comrades and for our Remembrance Day services. It is also used by seafarers as a waypoint to guide them safely into harbour.

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  • Climbing2nothing
    December 26, 2008
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    as death would guide us to life, your poem speaks truly of heart and of past chaos, I would wonder about the people waiting, when their love would return in differing form and if the reasons why were only known to buddha....

    anyways much love dear poet your write is grand indeed,
    w olive bread, fresh pesto and merlot
    -jas


  • Cupcrazy gold member
    November 19, 2008

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    A wonderfully poetic piece expressing the emotion one feels when face to face with reality, I oft have that feeling when I see our war memorial, the sense of loss just seem to cover me and I can feel not only the sadness of their deaths but the sadness of all that was lost with them, what they could have been, the children they could have had, it is the complete loss that stirs me so. Thanks for the great entry, I enjoyed it immensely. Hugs, Bunny

  • GreySquirrel
    November 10, 2008

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    Great imagery. I particularly like:
    The wind pelts it's face with salt spray but it cannot turn away.