I feel so lost
Caught in between two fires
But how can I be lost
When the bullets know my exact coordinates
How else could they hit their target in the rose
How could they perforate my heart
I am bleeding emotions
The ones kept even from you
The shot must have been lethal
For I had sworn we’d never part
Here I am
Fragile
Broken
Shards of me all around
Splintering into a million pieces of nothing
Slowly I evanesce
No one to stop me
No one to care
Lets not me a burden
To survive this gunshot
To occupy a bed in the hospital
And steal someone’s air
Lets not be a burden
To my own heart
I'll follow it to the end of civilization
For we can be civil no more
In my heart I have fought this battle and won
Reality is deceiving
And I do not know what to do
To make you love me with her
Author notes
i wrote this because my sister and girlfriend do not get along and i feel like i am always caught in between and i am always the one getting hurt.
tell me what you think. critiques welcome
Comments and Critiques welcome
Comments
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very emotional, well written. love these lines;
"And I do not know what to do
To make you love me with her" -
i dont think i would have got that it was about your girlfriend and sister if you hadnt have said in your AN.
that aside, a really good job. dark and painful without being over the top.
neon
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