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Silent Whispers

Voices echo, chambered venerability,
a receptive being, able to visualize,
what others can not see.
Open gates of perception,
adorned in spiritual energies,
channeling understanding & guidance,
to those lost , lingering in nothingness.

Creating light, hindering resistance,

presenting peace to those who hesitate,

on their final journey.

Author notes

http://frozenstarro.deviantart.com/art/Ghost-Whisperer-102555255
30-60 words

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  • fairytalelovestory
    February 7
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    this is beautiful so deserving.


  • chilali
    December 10, 2008
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    Congratulations on the Silver!


  • VampiresKiss
    December 2, 2008
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    this is a really good poem i love it


  • Xianaria gold member
    November 5, 2008

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    I agree with Kat on this ~ there is a definite peace that flows throughout this piece. Very nicely done, beautifully worded.

    Best wishes ~
    Tim


  • Sweet Impatience gold member
    November 5, 2008

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    there is a peacefulness, tranquility throughout this poem you've written. ahh to have a being that would guide one on their final journey.. this is a most pleasant idea. I love this poem that you've written. Fantastic job.

    good luck
    kat

  • chilali
    November 5, 2008

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    Wow! I love this! This was an incredible take on the picture and when I say incredible, I mean INCREDIBLE! Hehehe. Well done and best to you in the contest.


  • Reptile Lady gold member
    November 5, 2008

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    Beautiful and spiritual as she guides those who do not wish to leave this world alone.
    I loved the thoughts within this wonderful poem
    Best wishes hun
    Julie


  • Nevel
    November 5, 2008

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    very peacefully, very well done I think transquilly also...you added some kind of gentleness in your poem..
    Good luck in the contest


  • Jeremy0826 silver member
    November 5, 2008

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    Well done with this picture and all
    the best to you in this contest!
    Thanks a lot for sharing this here!




    Jeremy0826

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