Naked truth shackled
infallible whisper's uttered.
Delve deep in core
centre drowns the pool.
Poison barbed tentacles,
sting
blisters raised raw.
Suspended by cord
hides foetal
amniotic cushions her fall.
Author notes
http://azurylipfe.deviantart.com/art/Rumours-102492340
30 to 60 words Quickie contest - 30 words
In a list
A contest entry
- It's Quickie Time.. ! You Interested? by Sweet Impatience.
1200 points, ended November 5, 2008, 9 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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The naked truth can be just like that if we've thought otherwise! Fantastic take on that picture. Congrats on the gold
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What a fantastic write... you draw such powerful images...Bravo to you Julie! Congratulations on the gold...
Ken
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Love this too...
Another deep piece & so worthy of its Gold mantle...
Full of raw emotion in its imagery & metaphor...
Yet another fantastic piece that didn't fail to move me & leave me speechless...
Well done!!!
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YES!
I can see why this wins gold, honey. It's so very raw. and nothing pretty. . .very, very sad.
GORGEOUS bg, congratulations on another beautiful piece, sweetheart.
jin
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wow totally amazing write!!! This is so well written!!! Excellent details and descriptions!!!!!
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WOW.. omg this is fantastic. The imagery that you've penned with your words is absolutely brilliant. I love the first stanza, but ... I really love all of it. the imagery is vivid and very very strong. You did superb with this prompt.
good luck
kat
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Thank you so much
I loved penning this one
Much love xxx
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WOW!!! It really amazes me that you managed to instill so much imagery in this short piece!!! I really love the background too sis. It's beautiful. Good luck in the contest.
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Beautifully written and your word usage amazing love it - best of luck in the contest Background is awesome!!!!
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An amazing take on the prompt Julie! this poem right here is Gold!
Well done. Best to you in the contest
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