Words spiral in my head
[Only believed by me]
You tell me that's it been over and done
But I refuse to let go
Reality is my imaginary place
That makes me giggle when I arrive
Because the images are so improbable
As opposed to [my] reality
Your words don't crack my armor
For I'm forever encased in denial.
Author notes
Ah sorry I finished it so late -__- Time really isn't my friend lately ! Hope you like it, though it is particularly rushed...
A contest entry
- Prompt contest... 16 entries; 16 lines or less by Grey Mouser.
700 points, ended November 19, 2008, 12 entries
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Comments
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I do like this, lol. Good twist of reality where the dream is realer than being awake. Wrapped up nicely in a cocoon. Many thanks for entering into the contest.
Be well and be blessed,
Mouser
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