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He gives... He's eternal

 

He forgives every son of his that roams this earth.  
He delivers each and every one his wishes.
He listens when everyone is deaf.
He sees when everyone is blind.
He feels when no one cares any more.
He saves when no one is in reach.
He gives when everyone else takes.
He mends when everyone else breaks.
He helps when everyone else forsaken you.
He provides when everyone else abandon you.

He gives you growth when you are too small.
He protects you when you’re about to fall.
He humbles you when you’re too haughty.
He smoothers you when you are too scratched.
He heals you when you are too wounded.
He makes you smile when tears are all you know.
He makes you laugh when screams are your only songs.

He raises you up when you stumble.
He holds you close when you tremble.
He shelters you when it rains.
He closes your ears when it thunders.
He gives you dreams when you’re drained out.
He lights your way when it’s too dark.
He opens doors when their keys are lost.

He gives you sunshine when all your candles go off.
He gives you love when you are too broken.
He gives you friends when you are too lonely.
He gives you courage when you are too weak.
He gives you confidence when you feel so small.
He gives you trust when all betrays you.
He gives you faith when you no longer believe.
He gives you words when you lose what to say.
He gives you a heart so you know what love is.
He gives you a home so you know what warmth is.

He gives you a body so you learn not to possess.
He gives you a life so you don’t be selfish.
He gives you eyes so you see beauty.
He gives you a nose so you smell flowers.
He gives you ears so you bear comfort.
He gives you lips so you utter kind words.
He gives you hands so you can lend them.
He gives you feet so you can lead people forward.
He gives you a brain so you think before you speak.
He gives you a heart so you can love the world.

Pray to him,
He listens,
He hears,
He sees,
He talks,
He achieves,
He gives,
He delivers,
He mends,
He heals,
He protects,
He wizens,
He lends,
He helps,
         ...He saves,
He’s the greatest miracle in life.

 

 

(C)Noor 

Author notes

These were all things he gave me, I hope as he has brought be happiness and as he has smoothed my fears and sadness he will do to you... Just pray and have faith. He's listening, always.

Thanks for reading!

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  • Rose Angel gold member
    July 10

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    Truly given to you from God...beginning to end...This is a treasure of all He is, and should be highlighted.. An inspirational so anointed....Do keep yourself available for being his poetic voice ...He will use you....Bookmarking hun...You are a treasure to God, and to me! masterpiece!


  • SilentTearsOnceMore
    December 28, 2008

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    Awesomeeeeeeeeee poem
    totally wonderful.
    i love the line "He gives you a heart so you can love the world."
    Great poem


  • mcope8050
    December 12, 2008

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    Yes Indeed HE DOES!!!

    Simply put and put quite plain,,,we are/ have been blessed and need recognize this,, ALL is from him, for him, hand and hand with him,,,,,wow,,, should I say OMG!!! (first time I've EVER used that omg thing,,, but in this case,, IT FITS
    Thank you noor
    Michael


  • Pisces rainbow gold member
    December 6, 2008

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    bravo

    How blessed are we
    He is all, we only need to see, He is in every detail of our life's,

    when we see, we can look back and notice all the times He carried us.

    I have to bookmark this, it is very lovely full of gratitude and awareness.

    truly a pleasure to read

    and the ending is pure truth

    God bless you my friend...

     

  • mew2
    November 7, 2008

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    This is nice and soft the beginning makes me want to give something up to give to someone else you can add me to favorites that would be cool


    • Hikari Lady
      November 7, 2008
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      Thank you, sweetie. I am glad you liked it and I already added you to my favorites now I'll just look forward to more writes from you.

      ~Noor


  • Lencio Rodrigues
    November 6, 2008
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    "Looks" cool! Looks nice..

    Lencio


  • JohnnyD gold member
    November 6, 2008

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    Ahhhhhhh, yes, you have given it much more "punch"

    Very nice



    len


  • Lencio Rodrigues
    November 5, 2008

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    I was directed to this by JohnnyD and I thank him for it for this is something that I had to read before I could start my day. This is like soup for the soul and I thank you for sharing your wonderful thoughts about the creator, without whom we are nothing.

    I think JohnnyD is right, although it may look long, it would still read good if put in a line by line format, but this is my personal opinion and you dont have to change if you think this looks fine according to you.

    Thanks again for sharing, this was needed today.

    Love and light,
    Lencio


    • Hikari Lady
      November 6, 2008
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      I shall put it in lines then... and I am glad I wrote this, all those people's comments make me happy that through some words I could light someone's day.
      Have a good day, I wish to you.


  • JohnnyD gold member
    November 5, 2008
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    yes, indeed Noor, reams and reams of truth is spoken here- and like your name you have helped light the way for those in despair-those who suffer loneliness and heartache and other issues of life.

    only suggesting I might give is to put it in a line by line format??

    He forgives every son of his that roams this earth.
    He delivers each and every one his wishes.
    He listens when everyone is deaf.

    etc 5 or 6 lines per stanza with a break then five or seven more??


    • Hikari Lady
      November 5, 2008
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      Should I? I wanted to make it look like a message but if it looks bad like this then I sure will do as you say.

      Thanks for such sweet comment. It meant alot to me.


  • Snowing Kisses gold member
    November 5, 2008

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    beautiful

    noor this is amazing,your name means light and today youshared your light with me,this little gem puts everything in perspective and i really needed it today, beautiful words from a beautiful heart thanks theresa


    • Hikari Lady
      November 5, 2008
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      I am so happy that I could light your way with these words. He's the one who's true and who is there to help us whoever we are and whatever we do.


  • chilali
    November 5, 2008

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    Wow. So very beautiful. You have no idea how much I needed to read that, actually, you did and that is why you shared it with me. So thank you for sharing this with me. I really enjoyed it and needed it. You are amazing Noor


  • Sunkissed xo
    November 5, 2008

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    This is truly beautiful. It is delicate and very poignant, and moves my heart the person of whom you speak sounds like an angel!
    Great write

    Summer Moon xx

    • Hikari Lady
      November 5, 2008
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      Erm, he's God so he's better than angels. lol
      Thanks for commenting.

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