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Jasmine and Jake

I want a love
like Jasmine and Jake,
one of warm arms and of tender lips.
I wish for a kindness
like that of a cat,
a female queen mothering her kits.
I hope for a peace
like that of the grave,
a silence,
a darkness,
so warm and so true.
I want a love
like Jasmine and Jake,
and I only hope
that I find it with you.


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  • Anemone-Rose
    November 5, 2008

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    oh very well indeed, babygirl, *crys* ur growing up so fast. *sniffles* short and sweet, a loving story it tells!