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Prudence's Beholder

In Prudence's desolate purple garden,
The eye of her beholder
shines upon her...

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I love the picture!
Picture Credit: http://kaikuskylianfay.deviantart.com/art/Found-102307489

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  • Joseph Hollis
    December 25, 2008

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    Love your train of thought on this one. These 13 words compliment the picture perfectly. Well done, Ylova.


  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    November 17, 2008

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    I love that you gave her a name Gives something extra to the poem.

    This is lovely and sweet to read

    Thank You for Your Entry & Best of Luck
    Stay safe
    ~Manda


  • mysticstorm gold member
    November 10, 2008

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    How beautiful and inspirational...lovely imagery and metaphor...strong in brevity...best to you!
    mystic


  • Alyzeh
    November 9, 2008

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    Strong write, I mean you managed to tell me the entire tale in just 3 lines. That's a gift, seriously. Hold on to it, tight.


  • Girl-Interrupted gold member
    November 5, 2008

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    this makes complete sense to me as well! wow, so many interpretatiaons to a single picture! bravo and encore!

    becc


  • MD Masroor
    November 5, 2008
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    Short, sweet, just plain beautiful. You really are one of the best poets on AP. Keep it up!


  • HaileeDear
    November 5, 2008
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    short sweet and to the point. the picture is beautiful and the way you described it was fantastic.

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