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Before the battle

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(From the Songs of the Knight of the North.
Tales of Atoz, before the battle)
 
 
How many times on many fields
in years when I was younger,
have I awaited battle start
in cold and fear and hunger
and dreamed about my lady fair,
a waitin’ for the dawn
When I would have to rise again,
and somehow carry on.

Through charge and dash and armies clash
through battles come and gone
the strike of lance, and sword and shield
where battle lines were drawn
we, brave men all saw comrades fall
and mourned for foe and friend
for all we knew had lover’s who
would not see them again.

Oh, Ana darlin’ I grow old,
my limbs are stiffenin’ slow
I’ll face another battle soon
the fear is great you know
that this may be my final day
this battle field may be
the last I know, the dice I throw
may be the last for me.

Oh, Ana darlin’ if it is
be brave, grieve not for me
we  meet one day in paradise
to share eternity.

Author notes

The evening before another battle, the knight thinks of his darling Halfling elf and reflects on his growing older and his fear that this may be his last encounter.

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  • Swan song gold member
    November 29, 2008

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    Now this is awesome kind of reminds me of the Movie Lion heart when those crazy kilted Scotmen whipped the brits and no less then Tenneysens the charge of the light Brigagde

    Excellent reflection


  • Denerica
    November 6, 2008
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    I just love how you bring out the poem as if we are right there experiencing it..awesome.


  • Sandygram silver member
    November 5, 2008

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    Wonderful Write!!!!!!!!!!

    Hi, I really enjoyed reading this wonderful poem. It sounds beautiful when read out loud. Very romantic and heartfelt imagery. Love your rhyme too . Thank you for sharing. A delight to read this afternoon. Take care.

    Sandy


  • Pisces rainbow gold member
    November 5, 2008

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    BEAUTIFUL
    YOU HAVE CAPTURED HIS FEAR AND HIS PAIN PERFECTLY.
    LIFE IS QUITE A GAMBLE SUCH A PRICE TO PAY
    BEAUTIFULLY DONE MY FRIEND
    FLAWLESS FLOW
    EXCELLENT
    GOD BLESS YOU MY FRIEND..