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Drip Tricycle

gentle wave flowing
across frozen on the branch
a drip tricycle

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Kendhal22

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  • Harrisham Minhas
    November 17, 2008

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    Thank you for your Haiku:

    gentle wave flowing
    across frozen on the branch
    a drip tricycle

    It creates vivid ang gentle imagery of winter time.

    Thanks again.

    Harrisham Minhas



    • kendhal22
      November 17, 2008
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      thank you

      Thank you for the wonderful comment given to my haiku. Kendhal22