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Love and Nature

motives abandoned
shade shelters beastly hunter
uprooting tree

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Venugopal
haiku
The theme is : Love and Nature

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  • Harrisham Minhas
    November 21, 2008

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    Thank you for your Haiku:

    motives abandoned
    shade shelters beastly hunter


    A thought-provoking write.
    Nicely said.

    "uprooting tree" has 4 syllables.

    Thanks again.

    Harrisham Minhas


  • Harrisham Minhas
    November 17, 2008
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    Please rectify the syllable count soon.

  • Harrisham Minhas
    November 17, 2008
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    "shade shelters hunter" contains less than 7 syllables.

  • Harrisham Minhas
    November 13, 2008
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  • Pisces rainbow gold member
    November 5, 2008

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    appreciation and gratitude, for all of God's creation has purpose.
    great haiku
    God bless you my friend...

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