nature and love change
like seasons they have rhythm
metamorphosis
Words: K.Botka
11/5/08
Author notes
Time,seasons, and love change. Kathleen a Nazarene
A contest entry
- Haiku/Senryu Contest --- for 'Visions through Haiku' Members only. (Application link inside) by Harrisham Minhas.
400 points, ended November 21, 2008, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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The first haiku I liked. I remember writing my first haiku in third grade. I still have it. This one is one I live by already. That's why I like it.
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Lovely haiku!
Mariana
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Thank you for your Haiku:
nature and love change
like seasons they have rhythm
metamorphosis
A nice comparison between nature and love. Indeed love can change for the better or for the worse, depending upon individuals.
Well-said.
Thanks again.
Harrisham Minhas
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I like
well done
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TY!
That's an interesting Icon you've got there! Clever pen name too!
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TY
ah came from writing Dragon Fantasy, my totem Draig Teine Celtic Fire Dragon
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I have always been facinated wih butterflies not only their beauty, but how they become free of earthly restraints and fly .
Life imitates truth
God is sooo clever
lovely again stunning light shines from your graceful words
God bless Poetess...
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