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The feeling love

When you walk by i glance
When i think about you i smile
Butterflys arent in my stomach
My hearts just beats to a different tune
im sure its yours.

Love
Many songs and many stories
about the tales they tell
all different each time

Love
Part of a personality
Part of who you are
Part of life
But a whole of what you feel

When people ask what is love
you cant describe it
your best description isnt good enough
only its one of your strongest feelings

next time you are asked
to explain what love is
turn around and look at them straight in the eye
and ask
"What does water taste like" ?

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  • DreamerA
    November 9, 2008
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    loved it

    really enjoyed this read. great ending. good luck and thanks for entering xx