If Things Were Different

Taste upon my lips
desire to fulfill you
as you please;
see within my eyes
the lust with which
I crave your touch.

Feel within my fingertips
the pleasure I could

create.

Know within my heart
the love I hold
when I think of these
the things I'd do to you
if things were different.

Author notes

A curiously personal poem, for me.
Marvellous idea for a contest, well done...

A contest entry

sensual vignettes by adsaige. 400 points, ended November 17, 2008, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest

How Do You Like My Soul? --- Critical Review

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Moonlightdragon
November 17, 2008
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Very sensual well crafted poem
GlimpseOfPerfection
November 17, 2008

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A Beautiful Write
I loved this! I could feel the emotion, the lust, the want, the need.

I especially love this "the lust with which
I crave your touch"

Just wanted to return the comment thank you!
Lost Vampyre Angel
November 5, 2008
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nice poem