Love
from my experient present is archaic
it brings the smile to horizon
it is something that in animation
the motion would never stop moving
my suggestion is it's an unconditional drug,
in commitment you'll make decide, you either have shown on a shelf or swept under the rug
and for all it takes, you'll do what you can
to let the feeling stay on the emotional land
I saw him, out of the blue,
I know him more than all that stood before
but I couldn't speak well to him
but still, not to worry because my heart loves him more than my ears love folklore
My heart shot fast
I was stuck for what to say
but stuck in love
doesn't bother me
Love is only love if the feeling is felt by both
it's a share in a scary world
But with love, you're ok, you've got your someone to hold
Love comes to some,
and some go to love
it depends on the
circumstance-s
My heart shot fast an open fire to a pivate soloist standing as my romanticist
A contest entry
- Love by DreamerA.
750 points, ended November 9, 2008, 18 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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loved the words used, so nice xx
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dreamer a
muchos graci for opening the cont'
t'was a pleasure to be part of. hope all is well. glad you loved the words on love
xx
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this was a very unique and beautiful poem, i think this possesed a depth to it and that i had to read it a few times because i only scratched the surface the 1st time
brilliant write from a brilliant poet -
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rhythm stick
allo a halo Child.. of beautiful rhythm. wow, you read over? that's good
cheered me up now.. thanks.. you've made a sun in my rainby english weatherous day.
thankyou for your commentry.. i hope you're well.. and up for college!
'can't be late'.. hapy monday and take care!! xxx
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