I wish my wife was dead
Why wont the big fat hairy bitch
Just fuck off and die
Or at least do the honourable thing
And eat my pouting ring piece
Whilst I fart last night's vindaloo
(Which tasted horrible you stupid bitch)
Into her fat ugly face.
Love doesn't last.
In a list
A contest entry
- My other half by Angelo di Luce.
400 points, ended November 21, 2008, 20 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Convince Me to Stay on Allpoetry! by crosscountry07.
750 points, ended November 10, 2008, 31 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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I really loved this poem. It was very "poetic" (I think that is the word). Where do you live as I would like to dedicate my new poem about memories of wearing a towel on my head to you.
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Wow. That was very interesting to say the least! I don't think I've ever seen a poem quite like it. Kinda refreshing, then again it kind of makes me feel bad for her, in a way, and then I feel bad for you in a way. Anywho, thanks for entering and GOOD LUCK! -Liz
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sorry... i appreciate it but not quite what i was going for... i appreciate it about as much as u appreciate her lol
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You must love her very much, to write a wonderful poem such as this on her behalf
Well done
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What an unexpected take on a love contest. I really enjoyed it, and appreciate being surprised. Good luck!
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