Blow a kiss to yesterday,
bid a fond adieu;
do not weep for days gone by,
they do not weep for you.
Stand upright in the moment,
feel the presents of the light;
embrace the warmth within your shell,
it flickers in the night.
Faith is in the moment
when in God you put your trust,
give your burdens to our Lord;
for God is not unjust.
Rest your mind of weary thoughts,
rejoice the purest truth,
for what you do unto others;
our Lord shall do unto you.
A contest entry
- Inspiration needed by Spiritual Poet.
1500 points, ended December 6, 2008, 16 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Time to upgrade those green shinies again! by Nicada.
1000 points, ended December 11, 2008, 13 entries
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Comments
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This is a very inspiring write, and is so full of faith and hope. Very nice rhyme and flow here too. Nice poem, and thanks so much for entering. Blessings, Patty


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This is has a most excellent flow throughrout and easily carries you through the piece. The imagery really pumps up the spirit and it does have the power and gumption to inspire. Excellent


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i can stir in the moment ...kiss yesterday goodby...though sometimes i wish they never went away...lovely spill of who you are...an angel
mal

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Stand upright in the moment, feel the presence of the light, even though all of it...embrace the moments...blessings sis.


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So beautifully faithful!
Your words are a lovely testament to your sweet faithfulness. I am blessed to have read this wonderful write from your heart.
Blessings to you and yours~
Az

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A beautiful and truthful poem. So much truth and faith fills this one. A very good motivator. Really shows the do unto others aspect.


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"Rest your mind of weary thoughts,
rejoice the purest truth"
Indeed yesterday is gone and tomorrow has not yet dawned. This moment is all we have and we alone control its destiny!
Bravo!
Marianne

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Inspirational!
You continue to find the right words to paint a beautiful picture of the past ,present,and future with this one.putting ones trust in God,unloading all your burdens to the Lord ,for He knows the yoke we bare in life is not more than we can handle...with Him standing right beside!
A great write !

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A great poem. It made me to introspect. Thank you for sharing your wonderful poetry


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What a grand new revelation. And it is always best to let yesterday go and look forward to the future. With faith and the proper attitude, putting all others before you, the Lord always sees to it that we have all we need in the morrow.


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What a beautiful "Embrace,"
a most thoughtful prayer...
And now, after last night,
our tomorrows do look brighter!

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