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I love you more than anything

I'm not sure why I feel this way
It's nothing like i've ever felt before
I don't know why I make you pay
I don't know why I make you sore
I love you more than anything

My love for you is undescribeable
I try my best to make you happy
yet sometimes, some how, i'm unbearable
and I make you feel really crappie
I love you more than anything

Part of me would do anything to make you smile
and the other half just wants you all mine
I cant stand being away for a while
this must be divine
I love you more than anything

I'm not sure how to control it
this feeling's so unreal
I really cant see us being split
these feelings i cant conceal
I love you more than anything

There's some things I tend to do
that sometimes make you hurt
theres so many things, I can't undo
and wish I could divert
I love you more than anything

My heart skips a beat
when I see your face
without you, i'm incomplete
people tell me it's make-believe, but this is not the case
I love you more than anything

Author notes

Wrote this for a girl I fell in love with online. Then later went on to meet.

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  • DreamerA
    November 9, 2008
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    tell me more

    love love love it! the whole not knowing y bur knowing u do! good luck n thanks for entering xxx


  • boeing bettie
    November 6, 2008

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    This really speaks to the enigma of why we hurt the ones we love. I enjoyed reading it very much. Good luck in the contest!