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consequence

betrayal silenced
words, felt tremors
throughout a body
                                   chilled

ramrod straight he sat
while regret seeped sadness
deep within
                                   hollow

inference by others
severed ties,

shattered dreams
                                   broken

reality crossed lines,
blurred visions of hope
once nestled in hands
                                   safe


alone with thoughts
he watched time pass
                                  eternal

 





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  • Cynthia Gaines gold member
    November 8, 2008

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    Awesome!!!

    This is such a beautifully written, bittersweet and poingant write, I'm just fascinated by your muse's creative talents!! Keep on keeping on, I really enjoy reading your work and look forward to visiting your poetry pages tonight. Peace, love & hugs always, Cyn


  • Cannonsfire
    November 5, 2008

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    Sigh...and you see more from my silence than my words C