yes we are stranded
but happy
all alone
to whisper, kiss, giggle in privacy
the sun reflects on you shiny bald head
I stroke your shoulder and pat your shiny bald head
and tell you to be careful "the emptiness inside may overheat"
and then will be spoiled forever...
I even admit to you I love your empty spot there
that your empty head sprouts ideas I fancy
you grin and admit you fancy other things I have
I blush and we touch intensely and enjoy immensely
when it's over and we are both fully satisfied
I suggest you put up the yellow umbrella as a shade
so you can sit and write your magic seductice words
in the leatherbound diary
as a good puppy you sit and write
while I collect some fruits for us to enjoy
I even find some flint stones
maybe maybe later you can try to get a spark
I do suggest you break open the case of champagne bottels
drinking body tempature champagne
will still quench our thirst
and make our heads even happier
a sexy bald man with a wicked mind reinventing fire
and on the side totally capturing my heart, soul and body
a perfect moment in a perfect new world
luckily there are no snakes. or at least we have not noticed any yet
maybe the champaign
will even rekindle
our mutual sexual attraction
and we can have a scond helping?
A contest entry
- Stranded: a romantic musing by MJ Donnelly.
3500 points, ended November 20, 2008, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Thanks for the entry, I enjoyed reading it.
All the best,
mj.

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crikey wow,,i have a bald head M and nothing like this ever happens to me,,, i just have a ripped black umbrella sob good luck


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wow
keep a hold of him
good luck in the contest
June


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Well, well... Good luck to you and your friend!






