Chief sends warriors
bareback,
to hunt buffalo.
Children await
round fire,
dream catcher's,
mesmerise.
Author notes
Words Used - chief, warriors, bare back, buffalo, children, fire, dream catcher.
Septolet
The Septolet is a poem consisting of seven lines containing fourteen words with a break in between the two parts. Both parts deal with the same thought and create a picture.
In a list
A contest entry
- Poetic Form: Septolet - Prompt - Native American Word Bank by Little Eagle.
700 points, ended November 22, 2008, 7 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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Excellent
Whew! You did it again. that is amazing. Such a fabulous write. Thank you for sharing.
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Thank you for your entry
Nice imagery. I can see the imagery of the hunters going out for buffallo and the mesmerising dream catcher.
The form was okay, you had one extra word, a miss spelling with catchers and it was to be seven lines. But the imagery was present. Good try.
I encourage you to keep writing to read and comment.
God Bless
Tammy -
Howdy
Howdy parnder. Lets go ristle up some sterr. Watch out for those buffalo hunters though. Lol. sorry I am wacky this mornig.
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