Snowflakes falling from the sky,
Blowing like chaff in the frosty air,
Honey toffee cream dessert,
Melting in my mouth like a dream.
Snowdrifts whistling outside the door,
Swirling leaves dance about in the wind,
The cosy fire burns brightly in the hearth,
Rekindling joy and passion in my life.
Author notes
user name: h a r r i e t 5 6 7
A contest entry
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Comments
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I like this. It reminded me of the winters up in NJ when we would sit in front of the fireplace and drink hot chocolate. Lovely job.
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well done....Rekindling joy and passion in my life.
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Thanks for your appreciative comment. Happy Christmas, love Harriet
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beautiful thank you for entering the contest and good luck
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Beautiful
What a beautiful poem. It brought pictures to my mind. I really enjoyed reading this poem. Thankyou for sharing its beauty with me. I wish you All Good Luck in the contest. With my very best wishes from Rose xxx -
Some nice image here, a cosy write, especially the candy melting in the mouth and the cosy fire on the hearth. The snow outside just adds to the cosy feeling.
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Very good! Though it's a short poem, there's a great amount of imagery! Well, great work and best of luck!
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thank you for your comment!
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