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Carpal Tunnel Of The Brain

I can’t help it..
the need,  the greed to see it bleed,
knowing another will take its place
I pick, it’s sick
I plead,  OCD  won’t let it be
knowing I’ll ask again, maybe ten,
the need, the greed to see me bleed....

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  • mysticstorm gold member
    November 6, 2008

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    Creative and then some...ODC in the highest form...I know it too well...grrr
    nice flow and meter...well done...
    thank you for sharing.
    mystic

  • goalsv
    November 5, 2008
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    Good and creative, very interesting concept. Good Luck.