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My Beauty Deep.

Beauty is only
skin deep,
so as I weep
I pick, pull
and penetrate
my beauty deep.
Aware these scars,
to you, look cheap
The beauty with in
is mine to keep.

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  • poetrandy
    November 7, 2008

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    Very nice & Funny!

    Sorry you didn't win something with this one! It is really pretty darn good! Keep at it! Keep writing! I like your funny poems!


  • mysticstorm gold member
    November 6, 2008
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    Nice flow and meter...a very creative take on the prompt...thank you for sharing...
    mystic