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my excape

there's a place in my memories
a magical scene
i've never been there
but this places i have seen
its a haven to hide in
when my thoughts get to much
its full to the brim
with fantasy stuff
within the clear waters
nymphs swim around
and through the tree tops
the fairies can be found

each moment i spend
within this wanderers place
is like a revival

to this old heart

 

 

 

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credit: __oich__e_mahrnaay___by_night_fate

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  • xxRainbowDawnxx
    November 8, 2008

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    I have found such a place in my heart, to feel safe and comfortable. But I don't get to visit it much.


  • Angelflower
    November 7, 2008

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    Beautiful truly beautiful. I love he image here, and the way that it really came together. it was such a wonderful take on the prompt. Thank you very much for sharing. Best of luck in the contest.


    Angel


  • rbruce gold member
    November 5, 2008
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    A good interpretation of the picture prompt. I like it.


    • solitarytear
      November 6, 2008
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      thanks

      always good to see your comments......you always make me feel like i wrote something half decent this time hehehe.....seriously thank you.....


  • Soulful Woman silver member
    November 5, 2008

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    What a wonderful scenario you have presented here. You have taken the reader on a fantasy journey.
    Beautifully written.
    Soulful Woman


    • solitarytear
      November 6, 2008
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      thanks soulful

      for both your kind words and encouragement......both which means alot to me


  • hardluck
    November 5, 2008
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    Great poem,

    Nice flow, Inspiring thoughts. Good luck in the contest.


  • Devilish Temptation
    November 5, 2008

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    thats good work my friend I like the picture you have made here only wish I had something like that in my mind when things get too much for me. Theirs not one poem of yours that I don't like you are one of the best poet writers on here take carex

    • solitarytear
      November 6, 2008
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      wow

      praise i hope i can live up to....you arent bad yourself either.....each write i enjoy reading and sometimes rereading......thank you so much for your kind words and encouragement

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