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Massages








He pampers
her newly-wedded dreams
in warm caresses of
jasmine oils,


providing her
instantaneous bliss,



then puts her under
burning sunlight of infidelity,



where her griefs shimmer

naked.


















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  • mysticstorm gold member
    November 6, 2008

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    How beautiful...deep and sorrowful, so very creative with strong metaphor and imagery...nicely done...thank you for sharing...
    mystic