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foolish belief

each time this always happens
and i tell myself all over again
i'm gonna leave....i'm gonna go
then you say those words to me

"honey....god i'm sorry"
and you gentle kiss my cheek
"please oh please forgive me"
then you whisper in my ear

"baby know i love you
what happens here
its just not me...i'll get help...
this time i will.....i promise you okay"

you know just how to crush me
you know the words to say
you shed a tear and plead your case
and i always forgive

i'm weak for i still love you
and believe each word you speak
my heart it wont let me give up
and so again once more i stay

 

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  • Ziola
    November 5, 2008

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    this was very good, regardless of being in an abusive relationship or not, i believe we all have heard these hateful pleads. One suggestion 2nd stanza 2 line, should it be (gently)


  • Devilish Temptation
    November 5, 2008

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    Wow intense I can relate to this made me feel suicidal at the time.... This is a powerful and sad to the heart.
    Your words brought a chill.