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In Heavenly Places

Day in and day out
will wonders never cease.
Textured  clouds dance
round about us
as we snuggle in our sleep.

Are you wishing for an escape, love?
for I simply can't let you go
all your options are bone bare,
I hope this jollies you up
for I'm having a ball, a sestina.

I function best
with the minutest of distractions
I'm quite happy with this case
of books, this music rare
and with your guitar shooting
melodies through my hair.

Author notes

The guitar, case of Elizabeth B. Browning's books, and music that makes one scream and sigh...

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  • MJ Donnelly gold member
    November 20, 2008
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    Thanks for the entry, I enjoyed reading it.

    All the best,
    mj.


  • ea silver member
    November 10, 2008

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    Oh yes, we should all have the romance of Browning and the siesta of Spanish Guitars all over our islands... All the best to you in the contest and hope your daughter enjoys AP, too (saw your welcome contest.)


    • 2lullabyhaven
      November 10, 2008
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      hahaha exactly - we couldn't go too far wrong lol and thanks for your fun comments

  • goalsv
    November 5, 2008
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    Seems like it to me, I and can feel, hear and see it all.

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